300 days- Author’s Cut

I was standing in the balcony and was skeptical about going into the room. My phobia with the closed spaces and crowd was growing in alarming rate. I couldn’t even stand 20 people in a room. I became increasingly restless and if it was a meeting or gathering, I would be exhausted within 5 minutes in the room. I was trying hard to come out of the habit as my team had 40 people and it was difficult to conduct a team meeting with my phobia.

“So happy to sleep huh?” Sinduja had wrapped herself in a shawl and was standing in the balcony.

“No. I just didn’t get sleep”

“Tell me, how did it feel?”

“What?”

“You have not talked to her for nearly 10 months now. How did you feel when you heard her voice?”

“It felt like we never stopped talking. I don’t know why I felt that way. I used to think a lot about what we talked and how we talked and all. May be her voice was running in back of my mind all the time. Her voice didn’t change at all.”

“Aha”

“She challenged me to find her”

“That is nice. You have always liked challenges.”

“I am not sure Sinduja. Let’s say I trace her out. What do I talk to her? What is new in my life and how would I convince her that she belongs here?. For all we know, she might have been engaged with him by this time. She wouldn’t tell and I was not able to find if she was single or not. I will try to see if my friends work in her company in Hyderabad and try to get her phone number if possible. Or I will let the matter rest.”

“Are you giving up Jai?”

I turned away from her. I was not able to answer the question.

“Now turn around. Look at my eyes and answer me. Are you giving up?” she asked again.

“After her father died, she never addressed me with nicknames. Today she did. It looks like she didn’t forget me after all. But you know what, I am not worth it. I made her suffer. And even if she wants to get married, I don’t know what can be done”

“You guys are still young Jai. What is the hurry?”

“Well. She is four years elder to me?”

“What the fuck?”

“I know. It’s wrong in my part that I didn’t tell you. But I don’t want you also to discourage me. We have never discussed our ages. Now she is almost 30 and if she wants to settle down and get married, him or any other person would be a right choice. I am not ready yet”

“But you were ready to lose your heart and fall in love. If only falling in love is like falling in empty swimming pool. Only if people broke their bones a couple of times, they won’t fall in love as easily as you do”

“See sis! I love that girl. That is true. Even if she was 12 years younger to me or elder to me, this feeling cannot be changed. But life is a totally a different thing. We live in India. We give more importance to people around us than we give ourselves. I don’t want to be a pain for her. Not any more.”

“Ok! It is your wish.” She started walking away but suddenly stopped and turned around.

“You like to suffer in this love. Don’t you? You are afraid that if you talk to her again, this feeling will be lost. Aren’t you?”

“Sinduja!”

“Don’t try to refute me mister! I know how miserable you are. You want to hold on those thoughts till it kills you right?”

“It won’t kill me. I assure.”

“If you are in love with her, tell her. Or leave her alone. I don’t care if she is 4 years or 40 years elder to you.” She said and walked away.

This part of the story was taken out when the editor finished with the final manuscript. But I enjoyed writing this one. Hope you guys like it as much as I do 🙂

Comments

  1. Asha

    ” If only falling in love is like falling in empty swimming pool. Only if people broke their bones a couple of times, they won’t fall in love as easily as you do” – fantastic! 🙂 Waiting for the release!

  2. Passion of a soul

    These lines are much better than those I have read previously (From your rough draft). Your words have expressed that guy’s feeling in a wonderful way. Can’t wait to read the whole story. I’m sure it’s going to be an impeccable novel. 🙂 Good luck 😀

  3. The Anonymous Strikes

    While in love, all good advises are neglected due to our irrationality. We will pay for it later, after marriage.

  4. Neelesh

    I too loved the line – “If only falling in love is like falling in empty swimming pool. Only if people broke their bones a couple of times, they won’t fall in love as easily as you do” But it’s not only that, Bragadeesh. I have myself observed how, in our society, people talk in hushed voices about couples where the wife is elder to the husband. Your novel touches upon this intriguing reality. Your other statement, “We live in India. We give more importance to people around us than we give ourselves. I don’t want to be a pain for her.” reflects the psyche of several young men and women who keep languishing because of our narrow-minded society. It’s time we allowed more freedom in our relationships. Waiting for the big day.

  5. padhs2k

    My best wishes! My favourite lines – “It was as though, we never stopped talking…May be her voice was running in back of my mind all the time…”. Could relate to that. I am sure the rest of the chapters are as good as this. Good luck with the release!

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      prasanna

      I hope too. It is now in the editors table and whenever i get the revisions, I feel like a school kid. Thanks Padhma.

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